practice talk

My practice talk went so-so. "Only" 4 people came. I got lots of good feedback.

My talk needed more rhetorical structure (letting audience know what to expect), better motivation, and the scope of our contribution wasn't clear enough.

I find it hard to coordinate the content of the slides with the spoken part without either:
* sounding like I'm just reading the slides, or
* deviating from the slides and presenting information at the wrong time

Are my slides too good?